Celshaded's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lost Track]

You get five stars because the ending actually made me laugh out loud, and although I type "lol" frequently on the internet, I very rarely actually do it.

Brewster responds:

;);););)

[The Scarlet Steels Pilot]

I really like this, can't wait to see more!

[Clint Love the Kids!]

Damn man, your timing and poses are incredible! There's something really graceful about the way you choreograph your fights. Especially the last guy at 1:07, fucking amazing work!

[The Puzzle Hunters(Pilot)]

Why the hell isn't this on the front page!?!?

[The Legend of Old Man]

I'm sure that's what octoroks do all day

[Police Cops]

Awesome stuff. The audio and soundtrack was great and I love all the visual Gainax refferences. You may be the only other person on earth that's watched Re cutie honey more than I have.

[NWAR #2: High Stakes]

This was brilliant!

danmarkowitz responds:

Thanks!

[FAKE]

This is like a cut-scene before the boss fight...but with no boss fight

[Shards of Fate]

You have a lot of potential, and I think people are too distracted by the DBZ influence to realize how much effort you put into this. I don't think there's anything wrong with paying homage to a series that inspires you. I just think your execution is a little off.

I'd say your overall storytelling and pacing need some work. For example, that opening monologue is way too long and maybe even unnecessary. I think you would have benefited from just jumping straight to the scene where the main character confronts the bad guy. The backstory and exposition would have made more sense if this were a longer movie/series, but for something as short as this, the audience really only needs the bare minimum of information. And a lot of that exposition could have been alluded to visually, as opposed to having a long winded talking head.

I hope you don't let everybody on NG discourage you from doing what you want to do, they're a tough crowd. Just keep trying and applying what you've learn from your previous work to your new stuff.

Kofdizz responds:

I agree with your points. Thank you for the feedback!

[Truth About Art School6.5]

You had me at fighting game reference!